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I just got done reading this short erotic story called The Hive by Trilby Else.

The plot line is simple: There is a big corporation called the hive that uses mind control on its “employees” using brain implants.  Tanya, the main character, sneaks into the Hive to rescue her little sister who is currently under the Hive’s control.

The writing style is fun, erotic and descriptive.  It was beautifully written where I could actually picture what they were wearing (silver shiny and thongs.. sounds kinky) and how they were acting (kinda hot in a weird mind control way.. wonder what that would be like).  I could feel Tanya’s plight as she sinked deeper into the Hive’s inner workings.  It kinda made me think.. what would it feel like to be under someones erotic spell.

That being said, I was uncomfortable with the whole sister or sister thing towards the end.. but I just substitute the word sister for best friend and then that would have made this story HOT instead of just okay.  I liked the mind control aspect and the little twists throughout!  Anyways, I give this naughty story a 8 out of 10 because of the incest.. with no incest.. definitely a 9.  I would not give it a ten as it was slightly predictable!

Check it out and tell me what you think:

The Hive by Trilby Else